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#225. Rewrite Chapter 7. Time Out

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Ch 7.20 * #225 * Feb. 9, 2025
  1. Young Chloe (sitting on a rock): "So —" "What are you gonna do?"
  2. Adult Chloe: "I don't know if it'll work, but I'm going to try to fix us."
  3. Young Chloe: "How so?" Adult Chloe: "Listen up."
  4. Adult Chloe: "Number one: Take some riding lessons." "Learn everything you can about horses." "In case it's not obvious, in a few years you're going to spend a lot of time around a horse, like it or not." Young Chloe: "O — kay."
  5. Adult Chloe (blinks, startled).
  6. Adult Chloe: "Holy crap, thanks for following through on that!" "This is amazing!" Young Chloe (nervously): "This is weird..."
Characters:

This can't possibly end well.


— Inker